I want to get into this world building so much, but there are always what feels like dozens of in-universe terms that make it really hard to understand half of what is going on.

It is as if I spoke in english most of the time but translated important terms into mandarin.

A shame, as the art is also impeccable.

jax_cat said:
I want to get into this world building so much, but there are always what feels like dozens of in-universe terms that make it really hard to understand half of what is going on.

It is as if I spoke in english most of the time but translated important terms into mandarin.

A shame, as the art is also impeccable.

A good point - I miight have carried away a bit too much with in-universe terms, and I didnt want to "overexplain" things as the characters live in this world, doing this would be weird (first comic, still learning the balance lmao).
But I digress - I'm not going to bother reuploading/deleting on e6 since it looks like a pain, but, I've already updated a few pages (including this one) on FA to have a bit more clear dialogue. Won't replace the arabic with english text tho lol.

tyunre said:
A good point - I miight have carried away a bit too much with in-universe terms, and I didnt want to "overexplain" things as the characters live in this world, doing this would be weird (first comic, still learning the balance lmao).
But I digress - I'm not going to bother reuploading/deleting on e6 since it looks like a pain, but, I've already updated a few pages (including this one) on FA to have a bit more clear dialogue. Won't replace the arabic with english text tho lol.

You're open to criticism and change--that's more than a lot of people can speak for. I appreciate your openness and honesty about this; I think you'll do well!

tyunre said:
A good point - I miight have carried away a bit too much with in-universe terms, and I didnt want to "overexplain" things as the characters live in this world, doing this would be weird (first comic, still learning the balance lmao).
But I digress - I'm not going to bother reuploading/deleting on e6 since it looks like a pain, but, I've already updated a few pages (including this one) on FA to have a bit more clear dialogue. Won't replace the arabic with english text tho lol.

tyunre said:
A good point - I miight have carried away a bit too much with in-universe terms, and I didnt want to "overexplain" things as the characters live in this world, doing this would be weird (first comic, still learning the balance lmao).
But I digress - I'm not going to bother reuploading/deleting on e6 since it looks like a pain, but, I've already updated a few pages (including this one) on FA to have a bit more clear dialogue. Won't replace the arabic with english text tho lol.

Even if you use an asterisk with a translation at the bottom of future pages, you wouldnt have to change a whole lot if anything at all, it may help people understand the world more, so far im hooked and the art is fantastic.