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    drCometEnjoyer

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    I feel like this alice animation could have been so much better.
    First I thought this would be a banger because it is alice afterall. And it looked like real high quality at first. But even though this should be hot af, for some reason its not and feels stale. I cant quite put my finger on why, the visuals look great. Maybe its the rather lame tail job where the material looks dry and more like it would hurt than feel good. And the bj is a bit loveless too, no lip action, just 'put dick in mouth and move'. I dont know how much experience the animator has and I hope they dont feel bad when they read this criticism, its just my honest opinion and I will say that the graphical quality does look amazing.

    I loved Monmusu Quest and it has tons of potential for great animations, but I dont think I will return to this one unfortunately.

    ps. this inital tail spinning/winding at 1:20 looked REALLY intriguing, like that must feel crazy, but sadly it turned into a boring up and down movement

    *I wish the artist all the best for the future. Im also an artist in a different field and I know how bad criticism can feel. But sometimes criticism can help you improve. Im at a point where I demand constructive criticism, because I see how far I have improved with it :)

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    Mairo

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    beepboopgotthesnoot said:
    Maybe ask before giving criticism. Otherwise you come off as a jackass.

    e621 is content centric website, comments are about the content of the post.
    What's exactly the point of asking permission to talk about the post in posts comments?

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