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I love any feedback and this is not final!
You will see the full thing once Chapter 0 is out!

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  • owoperson said:
    That went way to fast for me to even comprehend what happened

    Even if this was slowed down I don't think it'll make any difference. It still wouldn't make sense.

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  • owoperson said:
    That went way to fast for me to even comprehend what happened

    angry_puppy said:
    Even if this was slowed down I don't think it'll make any difference. It still wouldn't make sense.

    I was trying to hit the nichijou fast pace intro at the first few seconds to let it slow down that is why I choose the music, love as much feed back as possible so I can improve it!

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  • It's a creation in the artist's mind, rendered in a digital format .. it doesn't have to make sense to be here .

    Updated

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  • owoperson said:
    That went way to fast for me to even comprehend what happened

    angry_puppy said:
    Even if this was slowed down I don't think it'll make any difference. It still wouldn't make sense.

    To me it seems like an anime opening.

    The protag gets killed by truck Sama (it's a meme about a truck with an unknown driver (people think it drives on its own) and kills randomly. Usually character when their in the beginning or when something big resenttly happened.

    Anyway after his death I see it as him going to hell. The plot shifts then to him having sex in which I can see it as. He was not bad nor good so he'll live in purgatory that looks like our world. Or possibly got sent back and has to do what he was doing for some reason to come back the the mortal world.

    What do y'all think?

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  • espenebs said:
    To me it seems like an anime opening.

    The protag gets killed by truck Sama (it's a meme about a truck with an unknown driver (people think it drives on its own) and kills randomly. Usually character when their in the beginning or when something big resenttly happened.

    Anyway after his death I see it as him going to hell. The plot shifts then to him having sex in which I can see it as. He was not bad nor good so he'll live in purgatory that looks like our world. Or possibly got sent back and has to do what he was doing for some reason to come back the the mortal world.

    What do y'all think?

    You hit it right on the nose

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  • mastrbaitr said:
    I was trying to hit the nichijou fast pace intro at the first few seconds to let it slow down that is why I choose the music, love as much feed back as possible so I can improve it!

    I'd recommend adding a bit more on each scene. As in a page or two so it's on your eye a bit longer. (I know that's probably the worst thing you can hear someone suggest.) Because it's means way more work. I hope eighter way we soler more of this in the future because practice will make it bether

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  • Holy cannoli that was unexpectedly loud. Also quite nice looking. A touch slower would be nice just from my own pref.

    And woo! This rocks!

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  • espenebs said:
    I'd recommend adding a bit more on each scene. As in a page or two so it's on your eye a bit longer. (I know that's probably the worst thing you can hear someone suggest.) Because it's means way more work. I hope eighter way we soler more of this in the future because practice will make it bether

    Yeah, I got this feedback a lot, I will slow it down and try to add some more frames on some stuff. Hopefully the finished product is not so heavily voted down lol

    ott-tot said:
    Isekai.

    Not really, you are still dead and now in between to see if you good or evil type of deal.

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  • piano0000000 said:
    don't let the downvotes discourage you, this rocks

    I didn't I saw it as a good feedback actually. Improved upon it and will release final build once done with Chapter 0!

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  • My theory of the premise:

    SMG3 was a really shit person in his life towards everyone, gets run over by a truck while a ninetails witnesses it, gets sent before femme satan who swallows his soul and now has to live in a universe in the demonesses gut where he either repents, or gives in to his lust, as everyone is basically an succubus or incubus besides him, oh and a copy of the ninetails is also somehow still watching his poor choices...

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  • THIS SHIT IS WAY TO FUNNY HAHHAHAHAH
    DUDE GETS RUN OVER BY A SEMI TRUCK THEN MEETS THE QUEEN OF HELL GETS EATEN BY HER THEN COMES BACK TO THE REAL WORLD AND HAS SEX WITH A WOMAN THEN GOES TO A (strip club?) THEN HAS SEX THERE THEN IN HIS MOUTH THERES A HEART WITH THE LETTERS "VL" IN IT THIS SHITS TO STUPID TO BE REAL LMFAO
    in all seriousness though why TF it got downvotes how can you instead of seeing it as funny see red and downvote it?????????

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